The top priority of business is making money, they do not need to have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays,

the

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almost

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most

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businesses

have the purpose of making

money

. So

that

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, it

believed

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that they did not need to have any public responsibilities.

According to

my opinion,

i

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disagree totally

this

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idea and

this

writer will give all the

reason

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reasons

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. On the one hand, the idea

businesses

don't need to have any public responsibilities alo right apart. Because it can help a

lot

of people have a job to earn

money

and create many job

opportuinities

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opportunities

. It

also

lead

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leads

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to an improvement in

economical

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economic

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value in

social

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society

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.

Moreover

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it can make a

lot

of

money

and be

wealth

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wealthy

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in

the

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a

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short time.

On the other hand

, there are a host of compelling reasons as to why

i

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am convinced

that

is

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there are some

businesses

dump

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that dump

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a

lot

of waste or chemistry waste into the river and lake. Most of the factory, they usually waste

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varity

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variety

of smoke

out

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from

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the environment, which

lead

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leads

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to

the

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extreme air pollution. Mostly, the company often use a

lot

of

vehicle

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vehicles

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to transport

the

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a

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large amount of product. It

also

bring

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brings

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many conditions to destroy the

enviroment

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environment

. The

last

reason is there are many

bussinesses

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businesses

don't

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that don't

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have any philanthropic actions. Because of generation profits, they can sell

any thing

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anything

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to

consumer

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consumers

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, even banned substances or

weapon

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weapons

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. It can lead to a

lot

of harmful

thing

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things

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to

social

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society

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and

infulence

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influence

the

safeness

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safety

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of people.

Moreover

, it

make

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makes

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the

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environmnental

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environmental

degradation and

money

be

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priceless.

Inconclusion

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,The top

prioty

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priority

of

businesses

is making

money

, which isn't incorrect. But to guarantee

the

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safe public and stable

enconmical

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economical

comical

value,

Businesses

also

need to have social responsibilities. I would contend

that

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with that

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idea.