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“Many people believe that formal pen and paper examinations are not the best method of assessing educational achievement. What is your view of examinations?”

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Some claim that traditional ways of judgment like multiple-choice questions are the best to evaluate achievements by insisting that those
tests
 are more reliable
whereas
 others argue that different estimate
tools
such
 as oral-based performance appraisal, observations, and portfolios. Each has its own positive aspects and limitations;
however
, I strongly believe that
alternative
 assessment
tools
 surpass pen-and-paper examinations. On the one hand, it is common knowledge that conventional
tests
 are reliable beyond a doubt and those are administered especially for national exams and international exams so that individual evaluations do not interfere with conclusions.
Furthermore
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 those can be evaluated easier than real-world assessments;
thus
, it is far impractical to implement
tests
 which are non-traditional ones to wide masses of the community, for those require lots of effort to put
.
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On the other hand
,
Alternative
 assessment
tools
 are really pathfinders in the learning process because they are mostly administered all the way long.
In addition
,
Although
 they necessitate a great deal of energy, it encourages students to cooperate as well. To illustrate, One can assign project-based tasks to a group of students and see how things happen. In
such
 a case, Pupils will act, help together and learn from each other.
Moreover
, even if conducting those
tools
 oblige both nation and learners to burn a great amount of energy, each of them finds an opportunity for perfect self-evaluation;
therefore
, they will discover their unique set of abilities with the help of hands-on
tests
.
Also
, they will foster their reasoning skills. In conclusion, even if both
alternative
 and traditional assessment examinations have pros and cons, I am on the side of
alternative
tools
. Since
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 Those are hard to conduct for a wide mass of people, they can be used in classrooms with a small number of folk to achieve maximum profit.
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