The graph below gives information about international tourist arrivals in different parts of the world.

The graph below gives information about international tourist arrivals in different parts of the world.
The line graph demonstrates the number of international tourists who visited 4 different places in the world over a 15-year
period
. As can be clearly seen from the graph the most noticeable feature is the proportion of people attracted by North
America
.
In particular
, at the beginning of the examined
period
North
America
welcomed 70
million
tourists.
This
specific figure experienced a steady increase until 2000 and
then
decreased slightly until 2005 at approximately 80
million
visitors.
According to
the second most popular destination which was Central and East Europe, in 1990 it started with a sudden rose for the first 5 years and it continued increasing less intensively until the end of the examined
period
which reached an equal proportion as North
America
. It is
also
worth noting that South-East Asia underwent a slightly upward trend throughout the years. Ultimately, Sub-Saharan Africa and South
America
were equally represented ranging from less than 10
million
arrivals in 1990 to up to 10
million
in 2005.
Overall
, it is evident from the graph that North
America
was the most popular destination for the most examined
period
,
whereas
all figures rose throughout the years.
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