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Reading for pleasure can develop imagination and language skills better than watching TV. Do you agree or disagree?

#pleasure #imagination #language #skills #tv
It is undeniable that reading is one of the most effective ways to improve skills more than watching TV, people read to get a set of skills
such
 as vocabulary, grammar and mind thinking. I totally agree with
this
 statement and I think it is an amazing method to get to the next level.
firstly
, research has found that the more you read the more experience you gain
due to
 the enormous information the reader will get.
However
, having several different
books
 can special summon a new personality and intelligence type of thinking.
For example
, students who used to study in medical school read more than three
books
 a week,
this
 process let them have the ability and the capability to understand hard materials and easily deal with hard equations and analyse the situations quickly.
Moreover
, reading sometimes recharges people's batteries and lets them feel more comfortable and relaxed.
secondly
, most nations think that going to university and studying a specific subject will impact their dream and get good results in the future, But reading several sources can lead to the same results.
This
 is because
books
 contain the life and experience of a high number of residents that transfer their bad and good moments and provide the solution to them.
Furthermore
, it is hard to save all the information and ideas in one place
while
books
 can, today people can read about history tomorrow they can read about history
that is
 why book benefits are more likely than watching TV. TV is not a bad way to improve skills, but it takes control by companies, in the opposite direction man and women are choosing what read. In conclusion, parents must teach their child how to read and how to pick the right topics it is the most effective method that shows the results in a short life period.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • imagination
  • language skills
  • active engagement
  • creativity
  • vocabulary
  • language usage
  • passive
  • simplified
  • dialogue
  • depth
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