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Topic 2: Scientists say that in the future, humanity will speak the same language. Do you think this is a positive or negative social development?

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Nowadays, technologists expect that all folks will have no barrier in communicating with each
others
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 by speaking and using a global
language
. From my point of view,
such
 a development,
although
 essential at some point, could be seen as a detrimental step forward. On the one hand, a single
language
 can promote communication between different cultural facilities.
For example
, one year ago, I had the chance to spend high school in Canada, where English is the most common tongue. As an international student, I remember making friends from around the world,
such
 as Chinese, Japanese, and Canadian. Not only that, but we
also
 shared our culture and learned about others' history through English. Everyone understands that expressing yourself in a
language
 makes mingling and making friends easier.
On the other hand
,
firstly
, using identical
language
 is that the chosen
language
 may become very technical and impoverished for non-native speakers.
For instance
, the Eskimos have several words for "snow" because they need it. They could not express themselves adequately if they only had one word for snow.
Furthermore
, Swedish people would be unable to use "lagom," which says much about Swedish society and people.
Secondly
, universal
language
 can have a bad influence on the cultural diversity of the world, local literature will be completely lost if everyone will begin
in
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communicating in the same
language
.
This
 can be evident from the fact that many languages have already become extinct. It is very disturbing for
the
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humanity.
To conclude
, having a global
language
 might help to promote communication.
In contrast
, many aspects of
this
 action might bring many adverse effects,
such
 as losing identity.
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