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many reasons.
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young
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people
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and hardly
to
have friends. Because most Fix the infinitive
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the
courses will be taught through videos which had been recorded before. So it is less opportunity for students to make friends. Though there is still available for adolescents to study an online class which Change preposition
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to learn the lessons at the same time with the tutorial of teachers. But Use synonyms
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method does not have much time or any opportunity for the learners to engage other members.
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can not replace teachers in school because it is just a programme and hardly adjusts the lessons base on the ability of each student. Use synonyms
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is a significant aspect that children should be trained by adults like parents and teachers in school Linking Words
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learned how important to say hello Linking Words
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peers and the elder.
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can replace schools simply because it has diverse information. Correct article usage
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it has many benefits, it can create drawbacks for young Linking Words
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