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Nowadays online shopping is extremely popular. Discuss the impact of it on the environment and on people who lost their jobs because of it.

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It is indeed true that in the modern era, electronic shopping has become an important part of our lives. In
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, they do not have an income source to earn money and have to depend on their family members to fulfil their basic needs
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 as shelter, food and clothes.
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, they are suffering from health problems like stress and tension.
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 is happening, because, many blue colours jobs are going to erase from local shops
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 as cashiers and stockers.
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, nowadays, the public is facing recession in many developed nations like Canada.
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, society is using more drugs and being involved in criminal activities to fulfil their needs.
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, the case of thrifts is increasing day by day and the government has to take strict action to stop these activities.
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, it
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 has bad impacts on our surroundings. First of all, the usage of plastic is rising because
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 they have to use plastic bags to put items. so, it can be safely delivered to the customer's home.
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, the usage of oil is
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 increasing, because they have to use cars or trucks to drop items in the customer's place.
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, pollution has become the main problem in today's society and the public is facing health problems
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 as heart disease.
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, even though online shopping saves the time and energy of the population.
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, it has many bad impacts on the nation and the environment.
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