People are responsible for their happiness. Others feel happiness depends on other factors in their life. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
A significant number of individuals argue that pursuing
the
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happiness
is their own obligation, where as
other communities show a different view that it will depend on numerous aspects Correct your spelling
whereas
in
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of
life
. According to
this
issue, I would like to discuss the leading factors of those views and provide my own perspective about
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on
our
happy Change the word
a
life
.
To begin
with, there are two reasons why people
think that the joyness
can be created Correct your spelling
joys
by
their own. Change preposition
on
Firstly
, creating happiness
can be done by people
self by doing diverse intentional activities. In this
life
, there are
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is
huge
number of hobbies that could be done without any restrictions and it will Change the article
a huge
the huge
result
the Add the preposition
inresult
fromresult
happiness
, for example
playing soccer in
the pitch with some Change preposition
on
of
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colleges
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wathing
movie series all day long in the house. Correct your spelling
watching
In addition
, reaching some achivements
is one of Correct your spelling
achievements
things
that Add an article
the things
creating
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creates
happiness
and it can be reached by own
effort. Correct pronoun usage
your own
For instance
, when a person want
to buy a branded bag, she has to show her effort in their job to earn money and it becomes her own responsibility to do it.
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wants
On the other hand
, there are some factors that affecting
individuals to pursue their joys. Change the form of the verb
affect
Initially
, personal
economic situation gives the limitation of Add an article
the personal
people
to get what they want in their life
. To illustrate, if a man do
not have sufficient money in his bank account, he will not Change the verb form
does
has
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have
an
ability to buy a new car. Change the article
the
Secondly
, some physical conditions also
provide restrictions to pursue joyness
. Correct your spelling
joyless
For example
, a blind person does not has
opportunities to enjoy a movie or a football match Change the verb form
have
in
television.
To summarize, getting Change preposition
on
the
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happiness
can depend
both Add the preposition
ondepend
by
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on
people
self and Change noun form
people's
variety
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a variety
aspects
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of aspects
in
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of
life
. In my own opinion, I believe that joyness could be reach
by ourselves. Change the verb form
be reached
Instead
of depending some
kind of conditions in Change preposition
on some
life
, as a human who able
to think, we can design our happy Add a missing verb
are able
life
by creating some interesting activities, such
as playing games or sport
.Fix the agreement mistake
sports
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