the map a below shows the ground floor of a particular art gallery in 2005. plan b shows the same area in the present day. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given diagram illustrates the main floor plan that has developed over the period between 1958 to till date.
Overall
, it is observed that the building has changed into three categories such
as office
, apartment, and flower
shop. According to
the given information, the First plan is examined as very congested, whereas
the flower
shop area is looking wide.
Initially
, between 1958 to1984, there was an office
divided into seven parts namely a meeting room, kitchen, assistant's office
, manager's office
, secretary's office
, toilet, and reception area. Moreover
, the biggest room on this
property was the manager's room. In addition
to this
, it was reconstructed into an apartment in the year 1985, and the dimension of this
land was partitioned into five spaces. Also
, this
complex had two large sections of equal size.
Finally
, an updated version of the floor plan rebuild in 2001, which was a flower
shop. It was constructed in a beautiful design, and separated into four rooms and two open-space flower
areas.Submitted by simran31788 on
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words office, flower with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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