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The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts illustrate what process the 3 countries : the Republic of Korea, Sweden and the United Kingdom used to deal with dangerous trash.
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, in the Republic of ,Korea the most used process for dealing with pollution is Recycling, in Sweden and the United Kingdom people use burial .
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Korea
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 69% of the dangerous waste products are Recycled,
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 only 22% are burial and, in 9% of the cases people use incineration as a technique.
In contrast
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 with the Republic , in ,Sweden only 25% of trash is Recycled ,but Underground techniques are used in 55% of the cases ,and incineration in 20%.
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, in the United Kingdom most of the dangerous trash, 82%, is buried, using Underground techniques.
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, the same 8% of the waste products are put in Chemical treatment and Dumping at sea methods.
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, only 2% of the UK's pollution is dealt with with the help of incineration.

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Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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