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More and more people today want to own famous brands of clothes, cars, and other items. What are the reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive development? (250 words)

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Buying products from well-known and famous brands is becoming popular day by day. Most
people
 own
this
 trend to improve their lifestyle and spend the lives they wish for. Well, I believe
this
 is not a positive and beneficial
development
 in society.
People
 are becoming more conscious of
this
 trend and trying their best to compete with other
people
 who are owning good and luxurious cars, branded clothes, and bags than them. Many members of the community are under stress, about how to compete with the elite class families.
This
 trend is putting a negative impact on the
development
 of the country
as well as
 on the next generation.
People
 have a complex to purchasing luxury products for themselves
instead
 of investing that money in the
development
 and growth of our country. Branded accessories do not matter when you're really concerned for your country and the coming generation's growth.
People
 fear what other
people
 will say if one is wearing low-quality clothes, or if one does not have a new model car of known brands. So, to avoid,
this
 type of stuff
people
 want to compete and struggle for a good lifestyle and environment.
To conclude
this
 essay,
instead
 of struggling for a new car and becoming brand conscious, compete with developed and developing nations in technology, IT and medical fields.
Then
, your local brand will be preferred if you succeed in the battle of
development
.
Nevertheless
, I believe buying products from famous brands is worthless and problematic sometimes.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Conspicuous consumption
  • Brand loyalty
  • Elitism
  • Marketing strategies
  • Consumer psychology
  • Purchase behavior
  • Economic stratification
  • Sustainability
  • Luxury goods
  • Peer influence
  • Global marketing
  • Brand equity
  • Materialistic values
  • Status symbol
  • Quality perception
  • Investment piece
  • Influencer culture
  • Exclusivity
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