The top priority of business is making money, and they do not need to have social responsibilties. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, there are

number

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of organazations 's aim is

earn

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to earn

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money and have high expenditure so that there do not have to do social

activites

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activities

. I agree that

this

expect

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is somewhat justifiable.

However

, I still believe that each

business

also

need

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to have the

responsibilties

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responsibility

to social not only focus on finance. On the one hand, we can not deny that the primary

purposes

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of

the

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economics is earn a great deal of profits. Every

business

begin

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at the number zero

then

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and then

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set

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sets

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up

their

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its

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own goals upstairs. Based on their own aims to not make any loss the top leader will arrange plans for each company to expand production, manufacture

produces

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products

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and not concentrate on different figures around them.

Moreover

, a profitable boost from each

institue

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institute

can help the government in finance and equal the national

economics

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economy

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. So in some way, profit

continue

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to play a crucial role and

need

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to be

focus

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more

in

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the future of the

business

.

On the other hand

, there are a host of crucial reasons that I notice

to

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convinced that

besides

profit

company

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companies

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ought to have

the

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public responsibilities. It is vital to understand that

business

need to have

a philanthropic actions

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a philanthropic action

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to social.

For instance

, the underprivileged and unemployment rate in public these days is

overeact

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overreact

overreach

overact

. Some

corporation

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corporations

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just need only the

talent

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talented

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employee and refuse the unskilled-worker.

Business

should expand their round of job opportunities to lead

an

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improvement in the working rate. In

additon

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addition

, charity is

also

an ethical

activites

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activity

that the top managements need to notice. It not only help

business

grow their reputations but

also

their money when they collab with

another companies

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another company

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.

This

is a key role in

business

development

as well as

bear shoulder responsibility.

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is considerable debate over how each

business

should react if they choose to tackle

with

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the problems of public requirement or go back to the drawing board

is

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commercial. I would contend that

their

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there

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still need to have a

storng

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strong

and

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respect

to

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for

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the outside public.