You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The map below shows three proposed sites for a new supermarket (A, B and c) in the city of Ellington. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words
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the map shows the three possible sites for a supermarket establishment in the city of Ellington.
in an overview, judging from the map,
it is clear that
site
A would be a better place for a mall than the other two.
site
A is located in a residential area of 90,000 people, in the south of the town, where it has a no-traffic zone and a parking facility. in addition
, A is closer to hampfort
where 30 thousand population resides and is only 15km away, and is right above an industrial factory. Change the capitalization
Hampfort
moreover
, A is surrounded by railway routes, making it easier to commute for people.
on the other hand
, site
B and site
C are located on the northeast and south end of Ellington, both surrounded by country life and industry. even though B has access to the motor line, it is far away from the residential area, making it a non-preferred place for the establishment. in contrast
, C is much closer to the populated sites but has no convenient commute system.Submitted by xx00 on
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