The tables below give the distribution of world population in 1950 and 2000, with an estimate of the situation in 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The tables below give the distribution of world population in 1950 and 2000, with an estimate of the situation in 2050.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The tables present the layout of the world population from 1950 to 2000 and the estimation for 2050.
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, despite the fact that the number of people in two regions (Europe and Latin America) has been decreasing since 1950, the strong rise of humans in Africa and Asia will bring a huge growth of the total
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in 1950 and 200, arriving from 9% to 13% and 56% to 60$ respectively. The growth in Africa will constantly continue till 2050 and it will arrive at about 20% but in Asia, there is an estimation of a slight decrease (1%) by 2050. These trends will influence the total world inhabitants which will arrive at around 9 billion in 2050.
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, there has been a continuous decline in the percentage of European and North American population since 1950 that has gone down from 22% to 12 in Europe and from 7% to 5 % in North America and it will continue till 2050. Despite the fact that there was a 3 % increase in the inhabitants of Latin America from 1950 to 2000, it will remain unchanged till 2050.
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