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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. Recently, abortion increased rapidly and becomes a controversial topic. Some people suppose that abortion should be legal while others are against it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

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My body my choice versus pro-
life
 is one of the biggest debated topics worldwide as there are some that fight for their right to choose if they would terminate their pregnancy
while
 others believe that all pregnancies should be carried to a full term where they eventually birth the child as even
while
 in the uterus that child has a right to live.
This
 essay will discuss both views and my opinion regarding
this
 topic. My body my choice, describes the right to choose whether or not you would want to terminate a pregnancy.
Due to
 the fact that they might not be ready to become a parent. Because being a parent requires you to change the way you view/live your
life
 as from
then
 on the most important person is your child but not everyone is mentally or financially ready for
such
 a lifestyle change and chooses not to change by choosing to go through the route of abortion.
This
 example is one of many reasons why some choose to do
this
.
Whereas
,
on the other hand
, pro-lifers believe every
life
 regardless of what stage or age is special and should be fought for even if they are still in the uterus growing. One reason for
this
 is that many people can not conceive or carry their own healthy children, and so, when someone is blessed with
such
 a chance they provide them with the alternative of adoption to bless those who are unfortunate as they would gladly take on the responsibility in raising them
as well as
 providing them with a better
life
. To give an example, my own parents adopted my cousin and brought him to the U.K. where he now thrives
instead
 of living in Africa where he might not have or even not lived at all. In conclusion, in my opinion, I am pro-
life
 to the extent of where biological parents who cannot provide their children with the
life
 they deserve could be adopted by someone who would.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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