You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. Recently, abortion increased rapidly and becomes a controversial topic. Some people suppose that abortion should be legal while others are against it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

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My body my choice versus pro-

life

is one of the biggest debated topics worldwide as there are some that fight for their right to choose if they would terminate their pregnancy

while

others believe that all pregnancies should be carried to a full term where they eventually birth the child as even

while

in the uterus that child has a right to live.

This

essay will discuss both views and my opinion regarding

this

topic. My body my choice, describes the right to choose whether or not you would want to terminate a pregnancy.

Due to

the fact that they might not be ready to become a parent. Because being a parent requires you to change the way you view/live your

life

as from

then

on the most important person is your child but not everyone is mentally or financially ready for

such

a lifestyle change and chooses not to change by choosing to go through the route of abortion.

This

example is one of many reasons why some choose to do

this

Whereas

on the other hand

, pro-lifers believe every

life

regardless of what stage or age is special and should be fought for even if they are still in the uterus growing. One reason for

this

is that many people can not conceive or carry their own healthy children, and so, when someone is blessed with

such

a chance they provide them with the alternative of adoption to bless those who are unfortunate as they would gladly take on the responsibility in raising them

as well as

providing them with a better

life

. To give an example, my own parents adopted my cousin and brought him to the U.K. where he now thrives

instead

of living in Africa where he might not have or even not lived at all. In conclusion, in my opinion, I am pro-

life

to the extent of where biological parents who cannot provide their children with the

life

they deserve could be adopted by someone who would.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

333 words

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