The car is a disastrous 20th Century invention that has made the world’s cities more dangerous and polluted, as well as being responsible for the deaths of millions of people in accidents. Do you agree or disagree?

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is considered today one of the basic necessities of everyday life.
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, a fraction of the people think that it has brought many disadvantages
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accidents and air pollution. It has
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that it is just a dangerous invention considering the facility it provides. There are various important factors behind these problems that need discussion
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by improving
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we can definitely change
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, one of the major problems associated with it is multiple accidents. But if you look deep into it, most of them are because of not following the laws and instructions.
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, the statistics released by law enforcement agencies in the year 2022 showed that 89% of accidents were
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overspeeding and breaking the rules.
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, it is the responsibility of the driver to abide by the rules and avoid getting stuck in
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difficulty.
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, another problem with cars is that they are the cause of air pollution.
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, it is leading to global warming and the greenhouse effect. The solution to the issue is the usage of alternative fuel resources
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of biofuel.
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, hybrid cars are easily available all over the world that use electricity for power production. Fossil fuel releases chemical gases that get trapped in the environment and
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the
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temperature
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, it is advisable that we
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switch to other options to protect our
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. In conclusion, I opine that the invention is itself very useful
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it needs to be used in a beneficial way by the consumer to avoid any mishap. Certain rules need to
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for the best utilisation of the transport
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safety first is always necessary. In lieu of blaming the transportation, we should first train ourselves to be the best drivers

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