The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

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The tables show information about how much Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas were bought in 1999 and 2004 in 5 countries in Europe.

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sales of bananas increased in Switzerland, the UK, and Belgium and decreased in Denmark and Sweden, coffee sales showed a climb in all 5 countries. Switzerland is the majority country to buy bananas in 1999, which was 15

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, and had a dramatic rise to 47

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in 2004.

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the UK and Belgium increased slightly to 5.5 and 4

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respectively.

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, Sweden and Denmark drop to 1 and 0.9

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respectively. In the first year, the UK only bought coffee for 1.5

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it climb dramatically to 20

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in 2004.

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Switzerland was the highest sales in the first years, it only rise up to 6

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and the other countries including Denmark, Belgium and Sweden

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increased to 2, 1.7,and 1

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respectively.

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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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4 paragraphs

160 words

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market share
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The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

Some countries have an ever-increasing proportion of population who are aged at 15 or younger. What is your opinion of the current and future effects it may have in those countries

Some people say that the increasing business and cultural contract between countries is a positive development, while others think that many countries will lose their national identities as a result. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.