The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
The tables show information about how much Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas were bought in 1999 and 2004 in 5 countries in Europe.
Overall
,
while
sales of bananas increased in Switzerland, the UK, and Belgium and decreased in Denmark and Sweden, coffee sales showed a climb in all 5 countries. Switzerland is the majority country to buy bananas in 1999, which was 15
million
euro
, and had a dramatic rise to 47
million
euro
in 2004.
Also
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,Also
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the UK and Belgium increased slightly to 5.5 and 4
million
euro
respectively.
However
, Sweden and Denmark drop to 1 and 0.9
million
euro
respectively. In the first year, the UK only bought coffee for 1.5
million
euro
,
however
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it climb dramatically to 20
million
euro
in 2004.
Although
Switzerland was the highest sales in the first years, it only rise up to 6
million
euro
and the other countries including Denmark, Belgium and Sweden
also
increased to 2, 1.7,and 1
million
euro
respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words million, euro with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "climb" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "dramatic" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fairtrade sales
  • significant growth
  • trends and patterns
  • market expansion
  • sustainable consumption
  • ethical products
  • consumer awareness
  • economic impact
  • percentage increase
  • market share
  • profit margins
  • trade initiatives
  • consumer behavior
  • retail figures
  • economic indicators
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