The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

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The tables show information about how much Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas were bought in 1999 and 2004 in 5 countries in Europe.

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sales of bananas increased in Switzerland, the UK, and Belgium and decreased in Denmark and Sweden, coffee sales showed a climb in all 5 countries. Switzerland is the majority country to buy bananas in 1999, which was 15

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, and had a dramatic rise to 47

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in 2004.

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the UK and Belgium increased slightly to 5.5 and 4

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respectively.

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, Sweden and Denmark drop to 1 and 0.9

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respectively. In the first year, the UK only bought coffee for 1.5

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it climb dramatically to 20

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in 2004.

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Switzerland was the highest sales in the first years, it only rise up to 6

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and the other countries including Denmark, Belgium and Sweden

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increased to 2, 1.7,and 1

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The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

The Education of young people is the main priority in countries around the world. some believe that educating adults who cannot read or write is essential for society and more funding should be made available for it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is shown that many criminals have a low level of education. Some people argue that the best way to reduce crime is to educate criminals in prison to help them find jobs when they leave prison. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives?

As science and technology contribute most to the development of society, science students should get more financial support from government than students in other fields (eg. business, language, etc.). To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people think young people should be required to have full time education until they are at least 18 years old. To what extent do you agree or disagree? You should write at least 250 words.