Some countries achieve international sports by building specialised facilities to train top athletes, instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think this is positive or negative development? Discuss both views and give your opinion

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some people are of the

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that the international clubs should be solely for professional

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, others argue that the

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buildings

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for all citizens.

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both points of

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will be in favour of the

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a glaring

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that to achieve global

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the country should assign

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amenities

just for talented

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because

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approach provides an immense interest just for the top individual without distraction from other

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aptitudes.

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, some clubs before registering

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performance test to join the club .

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, they prefer to purchase talented players from other

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clubs.

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they can participate in

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international

games readily without struggling to train

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with lower talents. in sharp contrast to

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of, it is significant to allow a

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of different capabilities to join the same facilities.

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international competition required a wide range of

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capabilities, and

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we can encourage

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of competencies to take

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athletes

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how far they are talented,

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them to enhance their capabilities

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intensive training. If individuals are resilient and trained consistently, they will be improved and their physical fitness will be refined.

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why it

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to mix

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different

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and support them

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better well-being.

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,

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essay discussed different views to be a part of

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international

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. by allocating facilities for talents only without confusion from

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different

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of mixing between

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of competencies and support them to join international

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competitions

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that required wide scales of aptitudes. I believe that the country has to catalyst all citizens to improve their physical

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capabilities

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capabilities

and eventually

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lead to better

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globally