he graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.
The line chart illustrates variations
on
Change preposition
in
Use synonyms
number
of closed and newly opened stores in a certain country within eight years.
Change the article
a number
the number
Overall
, Linking Words
two
divisions both showcased a fluctuating trend over given years. Meanwhile, it is evident that the two figures concurrently witnessed declines in a span of eight years.
Upon careful observation, it is noticeable that the Correct article usage
the two
amount
of closures experienced the most significant drop. At the very beginning, there were about 6500 domestic shops shut down in 2011, the figure Change the quantifier
number
then
saw a slight decrease to about 6000 in 2012 before reaching a peak in 2013 with more than 7000. Following closely behind, a sharp decline appeared, descending the Linking Words
number
to around 7000 in 2015, which was the lowest level over the observed period. After that, the figure rebounded back to Use synonyms
approximate
5000 in 2016 and Change the word
approximately
then
remained relatively stable.
Linking Words
On the other hand
, the Linking Words
number
of openings exhibited relatively Use synonyms
less
changes. Change the quantifier
fewer
By contrast
, there were more new shops than closed shops in 2011, with a gap of 2000. The year 2014 marked Linking Words
as
the highest Change preposition
apply
records
Fix the agreement mistake
record
of
Change preposition
for
opening
Add an article
the opening
number
, Use synonyms
as
about 6000. After that, a declining trend could be observed and the figure hit the lowest point in 2018 with 3000.Change preposition
at
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