You have heard that a developer plans to build a shopping centre near your home. Write a letter to the council. In your letter • say how you heard about the plan • explain how you feel about it • ask for more information about it

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter to express my dissatisfaction with building a new shopping centre in suburban area 24. During our annual

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get-together, I observed the news about

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plan and many opinions have been put forward by the

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, most of them were against

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its location.

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is because the proposed location is often used as a playground by children. Even though the land belongs to the council, many public events are organized in

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place just not only for youngsters but

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for adults

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as musical events and

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gatherings as well.

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, if we lost

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space, the

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would become helpless and deprived of an area to be socialized.

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, as soon as I heard the news I felt angry and so sad about my society. There is not necessarily a requirement for a shopping complex in our area as there are many opportunities for purchasing. At the same time, I would like to ask for an update on the request of turning

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land into a playground which has been pending for a long time. Is

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proposal been converted into a shopping mall? Not a dire need of people. I believe the council would take sufficient actions to make it not become a controversial issue. I hope

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information proves to be beneficial for the acknowledgement of local people’s opinions. Yours faithfully, John Smith.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

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8 paragraphs

240 words

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