The maps give information about the developments which took place in the island.
The maps give information about the developments which took place
in
the island.
A glance at the graph reveals thatChange preposition
on
,
a comparison of Remove the comma
apply
two
maps reveals a change from an empty area to a Correct article usage
the two
touristic
zone, where people relax and entertain. Before there were not any things, except several palm trees and Replace the word
tourist
beach
.
After the island experienced a number of dramatic changes. As can be seen, there were a lot of tourist facilities which are important in our life. The most noticeable is that a lot of Correct article usage
a beach
accomadations
were built, Correct your spelling
accommodations
furthermore
vehicle track and footpath Add a comma
,furthermore
were appeared
. Change to the active voice
appeared
have appeared
In addition
, what pleases that plants and trees were not cut down to build this constructions
. Between Change the determiner
this construction
these constructions
two
house areas is Correct article usage
the two
reception
located in the centre of Correct article usage
the reception
island
, Add an article
the island
while
the restaurant was built behind it. People also
can go swimming beach along the walkway whereas
, by automobile, everyone can reach to large
pier.Add an article
the large
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