In some countries, it is becoming increasingly common for people to follow a vegetarian diet. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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countries, the

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of vegetarians is increasing rapidly.

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trend might be a cause of unemployment among a particular group whose livelihood is dependent on the meat business;

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thinks that the advantages like the positive effect on the environment outweigh the disadvantages. The drawback of a large

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of a country turning vegetarian is that some

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lose their business.

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to say that there are thousands of farmers whose livelihood depends on the livestock business, they farm animals like cows and pigs

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and sell the meat in local meat

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. These

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might close if a large

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turns vegetarian resulting in these

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losing their livelihood.

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, in India, there are thousands of individuals, especially in coastal cities like Mumbai or Chennai, who earn their living through huge meet

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established in these cities, these

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will get unemployed if the

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close.

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believes that individuals would find an alternative source of income if these

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close. The major advantage of

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choosing a vegetarian lifestyle is that it is eco-friendly.

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, livestock requires vast areas of land to live in; they eat a huge quantity of food which would be enough for multiple

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to survive; they produce double the carbon dioxide in a day than an average human.

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these reasons farming livestock

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a heavy toll on the environment.

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research at the University of California, farm animals are the number one cause of global warming, greater than emissions from cars and gasses released from industries.

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believes that the environmental impact of the vegetarian lifestyle outweighs the drawbacks. In conclusion, if a large

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of a country turns vegetarian, a certain group might lose their income, but

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believes that the advantages of positive environmental impact outweigh the drawbacks.