In some countries, it is becoming increasingly common for people to follow a vegetarian diet. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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countries, the

population

of vegetarians is increasing rapidly.

Although

this

trend might be a cause of unemployment among a particular group whose livelihood is dependent on the meat business;

this

essay

thinks that the advantages like the positive effect on the environment outweigh the disadvantages. The drawback of a large

population

of a country turning vegetarian is that some

people

lose their business.

That is

to say that there are thousands of farmers whose livelihood depends on the livestock business, they farm animals like cows and pigs

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and sell the meat in local meat

markets

. These

markets

might close if a large

population

turns vegetarian resulting in these

people

losing their livelihood.

For example

, in India, there are thousands of individuals, especially in coastal cities like Mumbai or Chennai, who earn their living through huge meet

markets

established in these cities, these

people

will get unemployed if the

markets

close.

However

,

this

essay

believes that individuals would find an alternative source of income if these

markets

close. The major advantage of

people

choosing a vegetarian lifestyle is that it is eco-friendly.

In other words

, livestock requires vast areas of land to live in; they eat a huge quantity of food which would be enough for multiple

people

to survive; they produce double the carbon dioxide in a day than an average human.

Due to

these reasons farming livestock

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a heavy toll on the environment.

For example

,

according to

research at the University of California, farm animals are the number one cause of global warming, greater than emissions from cars and gasses released from industries.

This

essay

believes that the environmental impact of the vegetarian lifestyle outweighs the drawbacks. In conclusion, if a large

population

of a country turns vegetarian, a certain group might lose their income, but

this

essay

believes that the advantages of positive environmental impact outweigh the drawbacks.