The table below gives information about salaries of secondary/high school teachers in five countries in 2009. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The table illustrates information about the growth income of high school teachers shown from Starting
period
, Use synonyms
then
15 Linking Words
years
-terms until in Use synonyms
period
where it reached maximum earnings for five countries in 2009.
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Overall
, Luxembourg was the highest-paid country for high school teachers Linking Words
while
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in contrast
, Australia was the lowest one for the same role.
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further
, Luxembourg as the top-paid country for high school teachers had starting salary of 80.000, Linking Words
then
within 15 Linking Words
years
of working tenure, they got 119.000, and 132.000 for those who reach the maximum Use synonyms
period
which is about 30 Use synonyms
years
in Use synonyms
this
place. Linking Words
Next,
Korea and Japan were two countries that had respectively 30.000, and 34.000 for Starting wage, Linking Words
subsequently
after 15 Linking Words
years
working Use synonyms
period
, they got 48.000Use synonyms
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and 65.000. They both had the longest working Remove the comma
apply
period
to reach their maximum wage by serially 34 to 37 Use synonyms
years
which will receive 62.000 and 86.000.
Australia and Denmark were the two countries that had the shortest tenure to reach their maximum earnings among all. They only need at respectively 9 and 8 Use synonyms
years
of working Use synonyms
period
to attain 48.000 and 54.000 as their maximum wages. Despite the short term, the starting salary in Australia is the lowest in others with a value of 28.000 Use synonyms
while
Denmark is far beyond them with 45.000.Linking Words
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