Some people think it's better to choose friends who always have this same opinions as them. Other people believe it's good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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friends
is better for some
people
, but other
people
tend to have
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relationships
with their
friends
, that have
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opinion
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opinions
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with
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them
some times
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sometimes
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. I think
,
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different opinions among
friends
will be
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and created,
ofcourse
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of course
,
no
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not
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all the time. Actually, having
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same and uniform
relationships
are more
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for
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some
people
, that they avoid
of
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altaring
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altering
in their
life style
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lifestyle
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, because of a number of reasons.
Firstly
,
change
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and alternative the new
opinion
after a discussion between them and their
friends
,
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consistently is so difficult for them, perhaps they are a lot
arogent
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arrogant
argent
. So, accepted a new
opinion
,
that is
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of their
opinion
and
it's means
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it means
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is
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they
falled
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fell
.
Secondly
, maybe their view and expected of having the best
communicating
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communication
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with their
friends
is for acquiring calm and spending more time with each other far from any discussion when they visit them occasionally.
Finally
, a
disagree
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opinion
for them is dangerous, because they think, it will be spoiled their communication in future if it is
frequently
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. To my mind, if
infrastructure
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the infrastructure
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of our
relationships
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relationship
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was not
legally
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and originally
according to
friendly
rulles
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rules
, certainly it will have more problems. On
one
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hand
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some
people
have a great acquisition in the
relationships
with their
friends
because they have a
completely
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complete
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attitude
about
opposite
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the opposite
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opinion
of their
friends
. Even though
,
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maybe there are different
attitude
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attitudes
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among their
friends
, they try to use
of
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them to complete their personality after
full
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a full
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review of that comment if it is correct. They think, regardless of
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the difference
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difference
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differences
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between them,
this
kind of
opinion
can help them to achieve
new
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a new
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overview, that already they do not
any
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awareness about it. So,
purhaps
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perhaps
it is a creative
attitude
in the future life or job.
For instance
, when some
friends
discuss
for
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investing in different subjects, certainly it will be a spark for tasting a new field in more investment in skills than money. I think
,
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all
discusses
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discussions
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between
friends
are not spoiled, of
course
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it is more effective in our life. In conclusion, I think, choosing
atmosphere
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the atmosphere
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of our relationship
depend
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depends
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on our
attitude
even if there are some
disagree
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disagreeing
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views, that like it or not, some
people
prefer to avoid it.
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