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The pictures below show how tomato ketchup is made. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

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The pictures highlight the process by which
tomato
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ketchup
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 is produced and packed in order to be catered for customers. It is noticed that there are 15 stages in the diagram, starting with harvesting
tomatoes
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 and finishing with using
tomato
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ketchup
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 as a flavour for some dishes at home.
The first step is
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 that
tomatoes
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 are picked and put in baskets. After that, they are divided into 2 groups: good and bad ones so that
tomato
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ketchup
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 can get as high quality as possible. Good
tomatoes
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 are continuously delivered to factories, where they have detached some unnecessary parts including removing stalks, skin, and seeds from the inner parts. Having been stored in a container,
tomatoes
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 are crushed to become liquid. At
this
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 point, sugar, salt and vinegar are added, aiming to flavour.
The next step is
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 that the liquid is boiled and
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 left for 2 hours in order to get the right temperature. After the steps of fabricating
tomatoes
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ketchup
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, it is poured into bottles, which are
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 labelled. Before being packed into boxes, the bottles have checked the quality.
Following
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this
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, these boxes are loaded onto lorries, which take them to supermarkets. The final step is that consumers may buy a bottle of
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ketchup
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 and enjoy it with hamburgers and fries.
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