the graph shows the number of oversea visitors in three different areas in European countries between 1987-2007. the graph shows the number of oversea visitors in three different areas in European countries between 1987-2007.

the graph shows the number of oversea visitors in three different areas in European countries between  1987-2007.

the graph shows the number of oversea visitors in three different areas in European countries between  1987-2007.
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The graph shows the overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 to 2007. The graph indicated the comparison made between the coast, the mountains and the lakes. The Y-axis represents the number of people visited. The x-axis shows the year in which people visited. As can be seen in the year 1987, 10000 community visited the lakes which are the least on the graph and
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for visiting lakes. 20000 people visited the mountain and 40000 individuals appeared on the coast It can be interpreted that tourist to the lake has drastically kept increasing and falling from the years 20000 for the mountains the line goes in the upward direction showing the increment but not too heavy. the coast experience downfall in the year 1992 but since
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it gets upward referring to the increment in humans,
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, there is an
overall
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increment in the number of visitors in all the places.
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