The map below shows two proposed sites foe a new adventure company in the Caribbean. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant.
The above map display two proposed sites for a new adventure company in the Caribbean. Four
maps
describe below.
Firstly
, in first the Caribbean,plate
there is Cuba,
and Remove the comma
apply
a
Correct article usage
the
coco
Capitalize word
Coco
plate
it's in a 10 km axical
chain of volcanic rocks. In the trade of the volcano chain and a trace of the inactive volcanic arc. Correct your spelling
axial
lexical
Secondly
, in the second ,diagram there are even Volcano-sedimentary rocks, Limestones, the Bouillante Geothermal plant and La Grande Decouverte-Soufriere its
Correct pronoun usage
which
in
Correct your spelling
is
a
100 km. Correct article usage
apply
Thirdly
, the third map there is Basse Terre, Grande Terre, Marie Galante, Les Saintes, and the Caribbeans sea in the Atlantic Ocean is in
300 km . D Change preposition
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maps
describe about
very little.
In conclusion, the above data describe things Remove the preposition
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such
South American
plate
, the North American
plate
, the East American
plate
, and the West American
plate
. There are four maps
. There is
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are
maps
with very less information maps
cover data very littel
.Correct your spelling
little
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