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The map below shows two proposed sites foe a new adventure company in the Caribbean. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below shows two proposed sites foe a new adventure company in the Caribbean. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The above map display two proposed sites for a new adventure company in the Caribbean. Four
maps
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 describe below.
Firstly
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, in first the Caribbean,
plate
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 there is Cuba
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 and
a
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coco
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plate
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 it's in a 10 km
axical
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axial
lexical
 chain of volcanic rocks. In the trade of the volcano chain and a trace of the inactive volcanic arc.
Secondly
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, in the second ,diagram there are even Volcano-sedimentary rocks, Limestones, the Bouillante Geothermal plant and La Grande Decouverte-Soufriere
its
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in
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a
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100 km.
Thirdly
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, the third map there is Basse Terre, Grande Terre, Marie Galante, Les Saintes, and the Caribbeans sea in the Atlantic Ocean is
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300 km . D
maps
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about
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very little. In conclusion, the above data describe things
such
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 South
American
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plate
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 , the North
American
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plate
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, the East
American
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plate
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, and the West
American
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plate
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. There are four
maps
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. There
is
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maps
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 with very less information
maps
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 cover data very
littel
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little
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 86%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words maps, plate, american with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 7 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "describe" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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