The top priority of businesses is making money , and they do not need to have social responsibilities . To what extent do you agree and disagree ?

The important precedent in corporations was creating

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and they make sure that their social

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are unnecessary. Personally , I definitely disagree with the sentence . The reason which I will explain and show in the paragraph below. On the one hand , personal

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was the most important thing, it really needs in every case

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as conversation or chatting . It will be ineffective if work without good

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or kind

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. The company can not grow up at all , because the company's employers do not have any soft

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or kind of

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that can help in the company's jobs.

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that , making

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in an easy way was not unreal ,

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comes from many kinds of things ,

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as philanthropic action or creating a job for some unemployed. It is evident that working without social

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can make the way harder if businesses do not have a strengthen-steps , they can not grow the business.In ,contrast it will be a helpless thing that businesses need to carry . In social life , having good

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will receive respect from the people around , it does not matter if the business changes the

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of workers, because everyone needs to change to suit the situation

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the stepback.

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, there are a host of compelling reasons as to why

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am convinced that making profits or expanding production can be easier which can attract the employee passing the factory emission the perks . An employee who has public

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and soft

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to do work perfectly can achieve the perks easy than others.In fact, the production process can help the firm escape from the ambition of making

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. If a corporation is taking their attractiveness on

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too much , they will not think about the importance of social

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and the business will go down until the tops can recognize. it

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hard to take that the workers do not know how to behave with their customers, it can say that they do not know how to solve problems. In conclusion ,

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it is irrefutable that making

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without

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responsibilities

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is the worst way to do , I would contend that doing any job or anything which includes social

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, really needs a lot of soft

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and social

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instead

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of not know face to face with the problems as well .