The top priority of businesses is making money , and they do not need to have social responsibilities . To what extent do you agree and disagree ?

The important precedent in corporations was creating

money

and they make sure that their social

responsibilities

are unnecessary. Personally , I definitely disagree with the sentence . The reason which I will explain and show in the paragraph below. On the one hand , personal

behaviour

was the most important thing, it really needs in every case

such

as conversation or chatting . It will be ineffective if work without good

behaviour

or kind

responsibilities

. The company can not grow up at all , because the company's employers do not have any soft

skills

or kind of

skills

that can help in the company's jobs.

Besides

that , making

money

in an easy way was not unreal ,

money

comes from many kinds of things ,

such

as philanthropic action or creating a job for some unemployed. It is evident that working without social

behaviour

can make the way harder if businesses do not have a strengthen-steps , they can not grow the business.In ,contrast it will be a helpless thing that businesses need to carry . In social life , having good

behaviour

will receive respect from the people around , it does not matter if the business changes the

behaviour

of workers, because everyone needs to change to suit the situation

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the stepback.

On the other hand

, there are a host of compelling reasons as to why

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am convinced that making profits or expanding production can be easier which can attract the employee passing the factory emission the perks . An employee who has public

responsibilities

and soft

skills

to do work perfectly can achieve the perks easy than others.In fact, the production process can help the firm escape from the ambition of making

money

. If a corporation is taking their attractiveness on

money

too much , they will not think about the importance of social

responsibilities

and the business will go down until the tops can recognize. it

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hard to take that the workers do not know how to behave with their customers, it can say that they do not know how to solve problems. In conclusion ,

while

it is irrefutable that making

money

without

behaviour

responsibilities

is the worst way to do , I would contend that doing any job or anything which includes social

skills

, really needs a lot of soft

skills

and social

responsibilities

instead

of not know face to face with the problems as well .