The pie charts below give information about the composition of household rubbish in the United Kingdom in two different years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below give information about the composition of household rubbish in the United Kingdom in two different years.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts illustrate the main things of
families
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trash in the UK between 1985 and 2002.
Overall
,
while
the largest proportion of organic waste decreased, textiles remind the smallest percentage of apply all
period
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in question.  Is clear that in 1985, paper
the
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largest proportion of household rubbish (36%).
This
figure decreased to 16% in the
last
year.
In addition
,
the
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organic waste rose to 44% in 2002, from 28% in 1985.
According to
the figures, textiles a
most
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smallest part of rubbish. It stood at 3% in 1985 and reached 2% in 2002. By ,contrast wood decreased through the 17-year period, from 8% in 1985 to a mere 4% in 2002.
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