The flow chart shows 'trampling', the negative effect of tourists walking in the countryside for the environment. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The flow chart shows 'trampling', the negative effect of tourists walking in the countryside for the environment. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

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scheme illustrates the negative effect of tourists visiting the countryside on the environment. The most impactful negative effect of visitors that are walking in the countryside is trampling,they are damaging the grass that becomes flattened under their feet in the area. First of all the

vegetation

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is affected,because,as tourists step on the ground,they are

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stepping on plants and

vegetation

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tends to become weaker.When

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full grown

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adult presses

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his foot

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plant,it loses the ability to reproduce and grow

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results

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reduced

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and after that erosion,

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quality of soil and nature. Second of all,by trampling,

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the soil

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is compacted and becomes hard underfoot.

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Consequently

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the air and water quality is reduced and plants do not reproduce,grow and

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increases the possibility of erosion that later results in reduced

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.By adding all of

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up,we get a decreased quality of soil and a worse type of life.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words vegetation with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

149 words

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