The chart below shows the percentage of young people at university in 2000 and 2007.

The following chart depicts the information regarding the proportion of students at an academic institution in five distinct countries in the years 2000 and 2007.

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, it can be clearly observed that the ratio of youngsters was highest in Poland in the latter

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, whilst the minimum percentage was witnessed in Italy in the former

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2000, 38% of the students showed interest in the University of Italy

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, the percentage surged to 52%.

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, Spain and UK. The ratio of youth in Poland was 64 in 2000, which escalated by 14%.

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, an identical percentile was experienced by Finland which was 70% in both years. Probing

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, the proportion of youngsters was similar in the initial

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in Spain and UK which was 46%.

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, the ratio increased in Uk by 8%, in contrast, it declined in Spain and reached 41%.

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equal percentage of youth preferred the University of Norway in the

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2000 and 2007

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66 and 65 respectively

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