The line graph compares how much time it would take for three companies to manufacture a refrigerator in 1990 and 2000.
The line chart illustrates how long it took three enterprises to produce a refrigerator from 1990 to 2000.
Overall
, all three companies saw a decline in time
spent on making a fridge
at the end
of 2000. Company
C
still spent the longest time
in the time
period, while
the amount of time
spent by Company
B was nearly unchanged.
At the beginning of the period, Company
C
took 35 hours
to build a fridge
, however
Add a comma
,however
Company
A and Company
B took 5 hours
and 8 hours
less respectively to build one. Then
, Company
A passed company
B in 1995 and later became the fastest Capitalize word
Company
company
among all three companies in manufacturing refrigerators. By 2000, Company
C
was still the slowest company
to produce a fridge
but decreased by 7 hours
of producing time
compared to the beginning of the period. In addition
, Company
A became the fastest company
since 1995, spending approximately 22 hours
per refrigerator, which was 8 hours
less than in 1995. Finally
, the time
to produce a fridge
in Company
C
almost remained stable, taking 26 hours
to make one.Submitted by yienliu0019 on
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