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Fast food is a part of life in many places. Some people think this has bad effects on lifestyle and diets. Do you agree or disagree?

#food #part #life #places #people #effects #lifestyle #diets
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Eating habits play a vital role in determining
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's fitness levels.
Junk
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food
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 is a part of our life and it has direct effects on
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's lifestyles and diets .
Therefore
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 , I totally agree with
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 statement and
also
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 discuss the negative effects of
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food
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 in the ensuing paragraphs.
To begin
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 with , we live in a fast-paced world . Nowadays ,
people
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 do not have time to prepare
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 because hectic schedules of work life . The inflation rate has gone up recently .
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, everyone is busy earning more money so , they consume
junk
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food
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 .
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 , a survey by the united kingdom
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 authority that 69% of
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 eat hamburgers in their daily routine .
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 , in the present day, youngsters take a packet of chips and eat them
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 watching television .
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 , the ritual of family meal time together is eliminated.
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, daily consumption of fast
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 can have serious
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 consequences.
This
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food
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 contains fat and it is mostly deep-fried which adds more cholesterol to them . Excessive level of cholesterol and fat leads the high level of
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 issues
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 as cardiovascular and obesity In India.
For instance
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 , World
Health
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 Organization (WHO) study that the age group (18-35) suffered from high obesity and heart disease because of
junk
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food
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. In conclusion , folks need to be conscious of these
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 issues and monitor their intake of unhealthy
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 . If it is fine for
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 to eat
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food
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 occasionally.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Obesity
  • Heart disease
  • Diabetes
  • Sodium
  • Nutritional habits
  • Sedentary lifestyle
  • Addictive eating patterns
  • Socioeconomic disparities
  • Convenience
  • Affordable
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