A friend who is planning to visit you has asked you to describe the most interesting and enjoyable things to do in the community where you currently live. Write an email to your friend, tell about these things. In your email: •Say what these things are •Say why they are interesting/enjoyable •Suggest what you can do together
Dear Sam,
I hope you are doing well and are in good spirits. I am really glad to know that you are planning to
visit
me. I will assure you that you will never forget Use synonyms
this
remarkable journey in your entire life.
If I talk about interesting and enjoyable things in our community Linking Words
then
you will Linking Words
unable
to control yourself. There are plenty of Add a missing verb
be unable
places
where Use synonyms
number
of sightseers love to Change the article
a number
the number
visit
Use synonyms
such
as parks, Linking Words
museum
, beaches, shopping Fix the agreement mistake
museums
mall
and Fix the agreement mistake
malls
the
historical Correct article usage
apply
places
etcetera. I Use synonyms
am thinking
we will Wrong verb form
think
visit
all Use synonyms
Use synonyms
places
. As you are a travel freak person and love to explore things deeply.
People can enjoy multifarious brands just under one roof in malls. So, in Correct article usage
the places
shopping
mall, we will Add an article
a shopping
the shopping
visit
Ardene,Guess and Aldo stores and Use synonyms
also
taste the fast food as well. In parks and beaches, we can breathe in Linking Words
a
fresh air and enjoy the natural and scenic environment over there. Even on Remove the article
apply
beach
, we can enjoy paragliding and scuba diving. Visiting historical Add an article
the beach
places
and museums will provide an immense of Use synonyms
knowldege
about the sacrifice of Correct your spelling
knowledge
freedom-fighters
. Correct your spelling
freedom fighters
Also
, there will be a guided tour Linking Words
who
will tell us more about these Correct pronoun usage
that
places
.
we will Use synonyms
do
a lot of fun together and will click numerous photos to recall our memories.
I am eagerly waiting to Verb problem
have
seen
you soon!
Warm Regards,
Jazz.Change the form of the verb
see
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Coherence and Cohesion
Ensure all sentences are complete and clearly expressed to improve coherence. Consider revising sentences that may sound awkward or incomplete.
Task Response
Revise certain expressions for grammatical accuracy. For example, phrases like "unable to control yourself" can be improved for clarity and appropriateness.
Coherence and Cohesion
The letter opens with a warm greeting and ends with a friendly closing, which is effective for maintaining rapport.
Task Achievement
A wide range of interesting and enjoyable activities in the community are described, making it an informative letter.
Task Achievement
The suggestions for what to do together are clear, making it easy for the friend to visualize the visit.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite