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The chart below gives the distribution of worldwide car sharing schemes (%) in 2008 and 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where necessary. Write at least 150 words

The chart below gives the distribution of worldwide car sharing schemes (%) in 2008 and 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where necessary. Write at least 150 words
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The provided line graph depicts the percentage of
working
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age
 adults in four distinctive nations, namely France, the USA, Japan, and Germany between 1960 and 2015.
Overall
,
according to
 the graph, it is irrefutable that albeit the percentages of
working
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age
 population in all of these 4 countries
initially
 augmented, the rates of it significantly plummeted after
1990s
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. First of all, the rates of citizens of France ,who are
in
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their
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working
age
, commenced to rise till the 1990s.
Subsequently
, it fluctuated for almost 20 years, and after that, it experienced a downward trend.
Moreover
, the factor of the United States
also
 rose until
2000s
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, and
then
, it significantly fell. with regard to the other nations, the proportion of
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age
 populations in Japan
firstly
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 experienced an upward trend and reached its crest in 1995.
Conversely
, the rate started to plummet till the end of the period after 1995.
Furthermore
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 the
percentages
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 of
working
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age
 adults diminished to almost 63 per
cents
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. After
1970s
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, it augmented and reach its peak ,which was almost as same as Japan's crest point. Ultimately,
according to
 the chart, it will proceed to decrease till the end of the period
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Vocabulary: Replace the words age with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "plummeted" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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