A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary/ unpaid work. In your letter, explain why you want to do voluntary/unpaid work at the museum describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful give details of when you would be available for work

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Dear sir/ madam I am writing

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letter, regarding the vacancies that are open at your museum. I want to apply for

part time

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unpaid work.

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I am working full time from Monday to Friday until 4

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, I thought of doing some volunteer work at the Royal Ontario Museum so that, I can utilize

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of my time exploring better things. I would like to highlight some of my skills that can be of great importance for

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role.

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, I am an extrovert personality, always love to be friendly with others and respect them.

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, I have been working as a customer service representative at a restaurant and have experience

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handling all types of customers with different approaches. If selected for

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position, I would be available to work in the evenings from 5pm to 9

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on weekdays and 10 am to 1

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on the weekends. Yours faithfully Harpreet Kaur

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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6 paragraphs

156 words

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Enthusiastic
Volunteer
Part-time
Unpaid work
Museum director
Skills and qualities
Customer service
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Team player
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Reliable
Positive attitude
Availability
Professional goals
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