Your high school friend who has moved to another country will be visiting your country for a month. You have arranged a party for him/her. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter, give the date and location of the party say who are coming to the party and mention things that he/she has missed during his/her stay in another country

#school #friend #country #month #party #date #location

Dear Friend, I hope you and your family are in good condition. I know that you will be back in our country

sooner

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soon

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Hence

, I have a plan to hold a simple

party

to celebrate your come back with our friends. Please let me explain and I hope you will be interested. First of all, the

party

will be held in our favourite restaurant which is near the train station on June 29th so we can

memorize

Verb problem

remember

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the time when studying in college. I choose

this

date so you can enjoy your time with your family first for a week. After that, you can spend time

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partying

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party

with your beloved friend.

Secondly

, I have invited our gang to celebrate

this

moment. Their responses are so positive, and promise to join the

party

with us.

Besides

, I

also

ordered rendang, your favourite menu which you can't find in the USA.

Thus

, you can enjoy a delicious meal with us. Best Regards Yohanes

Submitted by patricius.yohanes on Fri May 03 2024

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Writing Style

Consider using a more varied structure and richer vocabulary to further enhance your letter.

Language Accuracy

Although minor language inaccuracies are present, focusing on reducing these could enhance the readability.

Task Achievement

You've effectively conveyed the purpose of the letter and provided all the necessary details about the party including the date, location, and who are coming.

Coherence and Cohesion

The organization of your letter is logical, with clear progression from one idea to the next. This makes your letter easy to follow.

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6Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

162 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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