Some people think the government should pay for health care and education, but there is no agreement about whether it is the government’s responsibility. What is your opinion?

Many people argue that the

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should emphasize funding in health

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and

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should take on responsibility. Personally, I believe that the

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should allocate resources to these fields but not the total funding. On the one hand, there are two main reasons why the

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should invest in health

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and

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.

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, the gap between the rich and the poor is expanding.

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, public funds can relieve the financial stress of the disadvantaged. In fact, because of poverty, many poor people weren’t treated in time so they died.

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, one who has chronic diseases like cancer,

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wouldn’t live long. If they have

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financial support from the

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, it can decrease the death rate.

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public funds, the

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can provide educational opportunities for all citizens despite their family background.

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, Viet Nam is a developing country with a low illiteracy rate. Many mountainous teenagers dropped out of school because of difficult family conditions. So Viet Nam should invest more money to enable them to continue their

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, they will

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be able to find a good job with a prosperous salary.

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, they will contribute to the country’s economic development.

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, others including me believe that it is not totally the

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’s responsibility.

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100% investment in health

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and

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will be a financial burden for the

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. The

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is unable to change the whole schooling or hospital system without citizens’ contribution. So

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is an infeasible plan.

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, people should be responsible for the cost of healthcare and

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on their own. It can improve the individual’s awareness. If someone is required to pay the treatment fee or tuition fee, he will know how to take

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of himself or study harder to achieve the best learning results. In conclusion, for the aforementioned reasons, I hold a firm belief that it is necessary to use the

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budget on healthcare and

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. Yet the citizens

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take responsibility for their own expenses by paying a part of the cost, rather than relying entirely on the

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.