Some educationalists think that international exchange visits will benefit teenagers at the school. To what extent do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages

International

students

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exchange

is considered one of the main features of a developed educational system in a country and a main

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determinant

determinants

of universities' and schools' ranking. The

benifits

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benefits

of

exchange

programs are not limited to the university itself

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but are extended to help

students

discover new countries, where they can get in touch with new cultures, be involved in new traditions, and make international connections that could help them in the future.

Additionally

, seeing how different people are in other countries

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helps

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broadening

the aspects and aspirations of

students

,

while

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contributing

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building a more tolerant generation.

On the other hand

, a new culture, new place to sleep in, and new people to meet could rise the stress levels of a teenager, who has just started to develop an independent personality, not

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being always homesick, a thing that I can personally relate to as a

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foreign

student. Being instantly

transfered

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transferred

to a new country, with different

tranditions

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traditions

transitions

and

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of life could to cultural shock, and sometimes

exchange

students

can't handle the experience and prefer returning home.

Nonetheless

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this

case outweigh the disadvantages to a great level, a fact we can see in the increasing numbers of

exchange

programs and the countries included in them.

Furthermore

, many of the

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projects are built and directed toward cultural

exchange

, like international Expos and conferences, other than the internet, which is the virtual version of

exchange

programs and is being currently used by billions of teenagers around the world. All in all, we are looking

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a new generation

that is

more tolerant, more open-minded and ready to explore the world.