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Individuals and businesses alike are choosing to communicate professionally or socially via technology rather than in person. Talk about the benefits and drawbacks of using technology for communication.

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Technological progress is growing every year and opportunities to use technology are increasing. A huge part of utilizing different technologies is
communication
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, including professional and social components.
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, conversations in real
life
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 and face-to-face
communication
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 are losing their importance in people’s
life
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. In
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 I want to give some examples of
advantages
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the advantages
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 and disadvantages of utilizing technological devices in our social
life
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. First of all, the goal of technological progress is
making
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 people’s
life
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 more convenient and safe.
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, using different technologies for
communication
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 professionally or socially requires less energy and resources for it.
For instance
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, Zoom meetings, WhatsUp Calls etc are usually used by HR in businesses alike for
interview
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interviews
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, because it doesn’t
required
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 time for getting there and an interviewer can be anywhere, only having internet access. Another important thing
using
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technonoly
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technology
 is that people are able to connect with each other, being miles away from each other and having no opportunities to see each other.
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, there
is
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 some cons
in
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to
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this
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 approach, like unstable internet connection, so the interview could
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be interrapted
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interrapted
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interrupted
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 unforeseen circumstances.
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,
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personal conversations are more empathic and more natural. So some people believe
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 better than online meetings.
To conclude
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, there are some benefits of using technology for
communication
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,
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, convenient and easier conversation between people and companies.
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, there are some drawbacks, like a lack of empathy and natural face-to-face
communication
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. I think, that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages, and using technology in our daily
life
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 and conversations is good, but it doesn’t mean to deny the importance of
communication
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 in real
life
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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