The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia’s share of the Japanese tourist market.

The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia’s share of the Japanese tourist market.
The bar chart depicts the number of Japanese visitors who travelled abroad,
while
the line chart provides specific details about those who chose Australia as their destination from 1985 to 1995. At first glance, it is evident that there is an upward trend. In 1985, approximately 5 million people left Japan to visit other countries, and
this
number increased steadily.
Finally
, it was reaching around 16 million in 1995. There was a minor decrease in 1991,
moreover
, followed by a subsequent increase. The graph clearly illustrates linear growth during these years. The line chart focuses on the percentage of Japanese tourists that visited Australia during the given period.
initially
, Australis hosted only 2 per cent of visitors from Japan.
However
,
this
percentage increased to 5 per cent in 1988, before experiencing a slight decline to around 4 per cent the following year.
Subsequently
, it steadily rose until 1994, whit a slight increase. there is a strong positive correlation between the two charts, indicating that by the end of 1994, the rate of Japanese visitors to Australia had almost tripled.
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