Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, many youngers waste their

time

on

smartphones

nearly every day. Because they have no

interests

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doing

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anything and

also

children

do not

any

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housework, if adults do not manage

to

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them.

This

means that they are addicted to their phone. As far as I am concerned,

this

is a negative development. Because several renegers spend their much

time

on

this

technology.

On the other hand

, there are too many modern technologies in the world and

smartphones

are using a lot rather than others. Many people say that it is so beneficial for us.

However

, they do not show

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smartphone

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devastating side, and

also

they are being insensitive to their

children

's upbringing.

Therefore

, many

children

spend their much

time

on

smartphones

.

In addition

, they might lead to terrible ways.

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, pubg is

the

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very famous game around the world and plenty of

children

play it nearly every day.

However

, they do not know that

this

game takes

their

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much

time

.

This

means that many

children

prefer virtual

life

than

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natural

life

.

On the other hand

, spending many hours on

smartphone

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smartphones

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has many positive ways if renegers use

from

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it correctly.

For example

, reading news, watching different languages of films and finding essential information on the

smartphone

only bring

benefit

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benefits

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for them. Unfortunately, they are not using that from it. When it comes to the bad sides of

smartphone

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smartphones

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.

This

causes

that

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many

youngers

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younger

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forget how to live in natural

life

, and

also

they cannot imagine their

life

without that technology

and

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this

situation has a big impact on

to

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their future. In conclusion,

smartphones

take a lot of

time

during the renegers career. It seems to me that it has plenty of harmful things on the phone. In short,

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children spending

many hours on their

smartphone

it

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is a negative development.