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The table and pie show the total value and sources of fish imports to the UK from 1990 to 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table and pie show the total value and sources of fish imports to the UK from 1990 to 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table given presents data
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 the values of imported
fish
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 in the UK from the period
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1990 to 2000, and the pie charts give information about the proportion of different sources (
Canada
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,
Japan
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 and other countries) of
fish
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 that imports to the UK. From the overview, the total prices of imported
fish
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 increased during the decade and peaked at 10.5
billion
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 European dollars in 2000.
In addition
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,
fish
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 imported from
Canada
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 and
Japan
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 made up roughly 50% of the sources of these
fish
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 each year.
According to
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 the table, we can see the value of
fish
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 was 6.5
billion
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 European dollars in 1990, and after 1995, it soared significantly, from 7.05
billion
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 to 10.5
billion
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. Prices went up dramatically in
this
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 decade. As for the pie chart,
Canada
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 and
Japan
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 were the two biggest countries that exported
fish
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 to the UK. The percentage of
Canada
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 was higher than
Japan
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 in 1990;
however
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, in 2000,
Japan
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 stood more proportion than
Canada
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words fish, canada, japan, billion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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