In many countries, paying for things using mobile phone (cellphone) apps is becoming increasingly common. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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After developments and generation change, the use of mobile applications for daily transactions has increased by leaps and bounds.
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, it has been popular in many countries around the world.
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, there are some advantages and disadvantages I would like to provide in the following paragraph.  
Firstly
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, millions of
people
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around the world own a smartphone, these devices offer many useful applications including
apps
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for payments.
Secondly
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, these
apps
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offer you the chance to transfer money from your device to another device
while
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using
QR
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scanner only. Surprisingly, most
people
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like to buy things using cellphone payment
apps
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because it is just much faster than using cash
instead
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.
Finally
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, the main information of these
apps
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is that no need to carry cash or
card
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a card
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, it is not required.  
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, there are some disadvantages
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using these
apps
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,
such
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as
the
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people
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are
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not friendly with
electronic
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and
internet
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the internet
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.
Furthermore
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,
while
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the device is out of battery outside
home
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there is no chance to pay.
Although
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the payment is secure, there is a chance of fraud.
For instance
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, we should strictly not provide
any
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own bank details to any random guy over the phone or in person.  
In addition
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, the thing that happens to most
people
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is random teenagers take their
parents
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parent's
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cell
phone
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phones
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and start to order things
such
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as toys, PSN cards and clothes after that pay
these
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for these
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things with only one click.       In conclusion, mobile
apps
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for payment have made our life
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way easier because everything can be done with one click. But considering the drawbacks associated with is wise to not totally ignore it.
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