Many people think that every individual is responsible for their own healthy lifestyle. Other believe that government should take care of it. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

Nowadays the majority of

people

hold the opinion that a healthy lifestyle is the responsibility of every individual,

whereas

others think that the state should take care of it. I totally agree that it is our own responsibility. The following essay takes a look at both sides of the argument. Many

people

believe that they should take of themselves.

The healthy

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movement may include sports, walking, yoga or running. Obviously, physical activity helps to keep fit.

Moreover

, it includes a well-balanced low-fat diet. At the same time,

people

should drink more water and stay hydrated. It is a discipline that every individual should have.

For example

, nobody could

not

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to

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force others to keep a healthy lifestyle.

That is

why it is the authority of individuals to keep a healthy movement. In some other cases, the government should provide areas for

people

who want to do physical activities. It may be stadion, parks, treadmills and so on.

Also

, the state can provide it for free.

Furthermore

, they could make a variety of physical competitions with prizes. It will increase the interest of

people

to take

a part

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.

For instance

, there is a marathon

where

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that

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all

people

want to join. After that, maybe

there

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their

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people

can make friends with

same

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the same

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hobbies and keep their healthy movement together. In conclusion, individuals should take care of themselves because it is their own life and nobody can not change their opinion about lifestyle if they do not want to.