There have been several complaints about the reception area where visitors to your company arrive. Your manager has asked you to suggest how the reception area could be improved. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter - describe the complaints that have been made - say why the reception area is important - say why the reception area could be improved

Dear Sir or Madam, Allow me to introduce myself, my name is Jim and I am your regular customer. I am writing
this
to express my dissatisfaction with your reception
area
. Allow me to explain the details.
Firstly
, when I
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arrived
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your hotel, I did not see any person in the reception
area
. During
this
situation, I asked your security staff to call the receptionist.
Secondly
, I am already waited more than 10 minutes for your staff
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, Henry with not
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well dressed. In my opinion, the receptionist is one of the most important
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all areas in the hotel. Through
this
area
, the first impression
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customers could
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and
also
if customers need requests, They must use the reception
area
. I would greatly appreciate your help in improving
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this
matter. From
this
area
, customers will have
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good impression
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your hotel and services. Yours faithfully, Mala
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • complaints
  • reception area
  • unwelcoming
  • signage
  • aesthetic appeal
  • directional signage
  • ticketing system
  • professionalism
  • feedback system
  • continuous improvement
  • welcoming atmosphere
  • efficient
  • clear signage
  • comfortable seating
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