There have been several complaints about the reception area where visitors to your company arrive. Your manager has asked you to suggest how the reception area could be improved. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter - describe the complaints that have been made - say why the reception area is important - say why the reception area could be improved
Dear Sir or Madam,
Allow me to introduce myself, my name is Jim and I am your regular customer. I am writing
this
to express my dissatisfaction with your reception area
. Allow me to explain the details.
Firstly
, when I had
arrived Unnecessary verb
apply
to
your hotel, I did not see any person in the reception Change preposition
at
area
. During this
situation, I asked your security staff to call the receptionist. Secondly
, I am already waited more than 10 minutes for your staff came
, Henry with not Change the verb form
to come
in
well dressed.
In my opinion, the receptionist is one of the most important Change preposition
apply
from
all areas in the hotel. Through Change preposition
of
this
area
, the first impression how
customers could Change preposition
of how
made
and Change the verb form
be made
make
also
if customers need requests, They must use the reception area
.
I would greatly appreciate your help in improving on
Change preposition
apply
this
matter. From this
area
, customers will have more
good impression Add an article
a more
for
your hotel and services.
Yours faithfully,
MalaChange preposition
of
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