There have been several complaints about the reception area where visitors to your company arrive. Your manager has asked you to suggest how the reception area could be improved. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter - describe the complaints that have been made - say why the reception area is important - say why the reception area could be improved

Dear Sir or Madam, Allow me to introduce myself, my name is Jim and I am your regular customer. I am writing

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to express my dissatisfaction with your reception

area

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. Allow me to explain the details.

Firstly

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, when I

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arrived

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your hotel, I did not see any person in the reception

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. During

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situation, I asked your security staff to call the receptionist.

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, I am already waited more than 10 minutes for your staff

came

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, Henry with not

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well dressed. In my opinion, the receptionist is one of the most important

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all areas in the hotel. Through

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area

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, the first impression

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of how

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customers could

made

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and

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if customers need requests, They must use the reception

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. I would greatly appreciate your help in improving

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matter. From

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area

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, customers will have

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good impression

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your hotel and services. Yours faithfully, Mala