Writing task 1:The diagrams show a small museum and its surroundings in 1990 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given maps reflect the various disparities that have been taking place in a particular museum between 1990 and 2010.
Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that the gallery itself has undergone significant transformations over the given period. Noticeably, the exhibition room was decreased in the square footage and outside there were some alterations to the surrounding area to allow for greater access and leisure.
In the interior, the museum in 1990 contained a store room in the top-left corner, with various exhibition spaces on all sides, and a small shop in the bottom right-hand corner. Furthermore
, by 2001, the shop was expanded towards the left which was the adjacent exhibition room.
Outside the main structure, the largest change is the extension of the car park on the right side which subsumed a garden beneath it. Additionally
, the path, the road, as well as
the garden at the top of the building remained unchanged over the timeline. Finally
, the last
difference was the cottage in the bottom left corner across the foundation was renovated to become a café.Submitted by anhthu3826
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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