The chart below shows information about subway systems in three major European cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main information and making comparisons.

The chart below shows information about subway systems in three major European cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main information and making comparisons.
The chart illustrates data about
metro
systems in
London
,
Paris
and
Moscow
.
Overall
, all three metros are huge and each of them leads in one feature shown in the chart. The
London
Underground is the longest,
Paris
Metro
has the most
stations
and the
Moscow
Metro
is the busiest.
Firstly
we can see that all three are huge underground systems and each one exceeds in exact features.
London
Underground is the longest one with 408km
length
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in comparison with
Paris
and
Moscow
systems which are 214km and 308km respectively.
In contrast
with ,length the most number of
stations
has
Paris
Metro
with 300
stations
.
London
Underground
stations
are nearly about to
Paris
Metro
but
Moscow
Metros
stations
are about twofold fewer than
Paris
Metro
.
Secondly
Add a comma
,Secondly
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we can see the busiest
metro
is the
Moscow
subway with 6.5 million passengers daily which is more than twofold many than in
London
and
Paris
Metro
is between them with daily passengers using.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words metro, london, paris, moscow, stations with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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