The chart below shows information about subway systems in three major European cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main information and making comparisons.
The chart illustrates data about
metro
systems in London
, Paris
and Moscow
.
Overall
, all three metros are huge and each of them leads in one feature shown in the chart. The London
Underground is the longest, Paris
Metro
has the most stations
and the Moscow
Metro
is the busiest.
Firstly
we can see that all three are huge underground systems and each one exceeds in exact features. London
Underground is the longest one with 408km length
in comparison with Change preposition
in length
Paris
and Moscow
systems which are 214km and 308km respectively. In contrast
with ,length the most number of stations
has Paris
Metro
with 300 stations
. London
Underground stations
are nearly about to Paris
Metro
but Moscow
Metros stations
are about twofold fewer than Paris
Metro
.
Secondly
we can see the busiest Add a comma
,Secondly
metro
is the Moscow
subway with 6.5 million passengers daily which is more than twofold many than in London
and Paris
Metro
is between them with daily passengers using.Submitted by mamik199316 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
▼
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words metro, london, paris, moscow, stations with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
▼
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
▼