The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the cyclical process of how distributed
plastic
bottles are recycled.
Overall
, this
process has been made in nine steps, however
, this
has been built by humans and machines, mainly machines do most of the steps.
Firstly
, when the used plastic
becomes garbage, it is separated by humans into the recycling truck to the recycling centre. Following
this
, in this
centre, there is someone to give useful buttles
,in other words, do the sorting. in the fourth ,stage the buttles
have to compress into blocks for crushing. The crushed part of buttles
is placed in liquid for washing, moreover
, the clear crunch plastic
is put in the device to produce plastic
pellets.
After all, the plastic
should face the heater to become a raw material, as we can see in the eighth stage is the raw material ready to be various thing
Fix the agreement mistake
things
for example
pens, t-shirts and again buttles
and this
process has been repeated.Submitted by y.maryam.2004 on
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words plastic, buttles with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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