The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram illustrates the cyclical process of how distributed
plastic
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bottles are recycled.
Overall
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,
this
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process has been made in nine steps,
however
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,
this
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has been built by humans and machines, mainly machines do most of the steps.
Firstly
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, when the used
plastic
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becomes garbage, it is separated by humans into the recycling truck to the recycling centre.
Following
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, in
this
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centre, there is someone to give useful
buttles
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,in other words, do the sorting. in the fourth ,stage the
buttles
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have to compress into blocks for crushing. The crushed part of
buttles
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is placed in liquid for washing,
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, the clear crunch
plastic
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is put in the device to produce
plastic
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pellets. After all, the
plastic
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should face the heater to become a raw material, as we can see in the eighth stage is the raw material ready to be various
thing
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for example
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pens, t-shirts and again
buttles
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and
this
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process has been repeated.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words plastic, buttles with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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