The most common solution for criminal behaviour is prison but many believe education is a better method. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Locking

criminals

has remained the main answer to a felony,

however

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some argue that there is a better solution which is to enhance the

education

system. I will argue that,

While

it is still essential for

criminals

to be sentenced to prison for that subsequent

crime

, improving

education

should attract the most attention from the authorities. One reason for agreeing with focusing on developing

education

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system as a remedy for criminal behaviours is that it will eventually bring about economic benefits not only for

society

but

also

for individuals.

This

is because more graduation can open more opportunities for people in

society

to generate more revenue and set up new businesses.

Consequently

,

this

development will decrease the unemployment rate and would cause better welfare for the members of

society

, which strips them of reasons to commit

crime

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. Take

for example

China, which had experienced a high poverty level and staggering criminality before becoming an economic superpower.

This

curb in

crime

rate is mainly

due to

the rise in citizens' welfare levels

as well as

the government's attempts to enhance infrastructure and the particular

education

system.

Hence

, improving schools and universities is essential in combating

crime

since it will give opportunities for the progression of the economy and the convenience of citizens.

Moreover

, law enforcement should have the tools to implement the laws and spread justice. It is important to deter people from committing

crime

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and incentivise citizens' good behaviours. Prison is one of the many ways of controlling

society

based on the laws imposed, ensuring that

society

would not fall into chaos.

For instance

, South Asia countries

such

as Vietnam and South Korea have been successful in combating drug trafficking as these countries imposed strict legislation to penalise those responsible.

By contrast

, European countries did not act well in

this

regard since their authorities were unable to come up with laws to prevent

criminals

in

this

area. In conclusion,

while

enforcing the law on felons in the form of prison is essential for deterring

criminals

from committing

crime

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, the government ought to invest in

education

simultaneously since it will give economic benefits to people and make them unwilling to commit

crime

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